Pre Production: Simon's second Idea Feedback
After briefing simon on my updated idea, I received some helpful feedback during our meeting. Think about the different ways you could approach the story. At the moment, There seems to be a lot going on in terms of the story line but it is a good start. Think about how you can show what has happened without actually showing it. Instead of showing the main character and his female companion meeting, how about having them already knowing each other? this is a way of cutting down time and getting straight into the story. Maybe think about what stage in life the character is in. Is he an adult living at home, pretending to go to a corporate job but actually doing art against his parent's will? Is he at university? Find a way of selecting the major events. Don't just skim over everything otherwise it will lack depth. Find the important ones and capitalise on it. My Thoughts: I fully agree with this feedback as I ...